Blue Fenêtre (Old) Poem by Georgios Venetopoulos

Blue Fenêtre (Old)



The night encompassed his face and voice,
outside the blue fenêtre, alone he stood,
his thought succumbed to a doubtful choice
unfinished structure made from balsa wood.

The flying daughters of the night, wind-wrought,
escorted shades of blue and raindrops shed,
she fled, a monochrome contrast he sought;
in air her photograph averts, misled.

The nighttime beckoned on its steady mold;
In that same sight he touched her face and braved,
the longitudes besought, belied and called,
contrasting him outside his dream and grave.

In air, suspended, a newspaper folds
dispatched waving renders his advance,
its insignificance his spirit holds
before the sill she mends his nightly dance.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
© 03-22-2013, G. Venetopoulos, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic Pentameter)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 05 January 2016

I do admire your knowledge of the english language, But I'm not able to feel it as a criticer should do before sayng a single word upon it.

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