Friday, September 23, 2016

Blue Willow Comments

Rating: 4.4

A pond will deepen toward the center like a plate
we traced its shallow rim my mother steering
my inner tube past the rushes where I looked
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Jody Gladding
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Seamus O Brian 27 September 2016

Simply but powerfully reminds us that life is made of many small moments. Live in each one, appreciate the journey, find the end of the journey in each step.

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Barry Middleton 27 September 2016

Lovely images and memories make a very good poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2016

Toward the center! ! Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 27 September 2016

Very true, .

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John Graham 27 September 2016

A very good nature poem.

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Jody Gladding

Jody Gladding

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