Aisha Love

Rookie (5-25-93 / Baltimore)

Body - Poem by Aisha Love

Tears...
silent prayers that
the heart sends.
Prayers that the mouth is too
weak to say.
Mind...
tells the heart sinful thoughts
unaware of the pain it causes.
Soul...
wants to defend the heart
but is told to do nothing.
Self...
walks around unaware
of the internal conflict.
Like a zombie
revived but still uncomplete.
Hands...
intended for beauty yet
causes most destruction.
Causes the self more pain
than peace.
Poem...
written description for suicide
or beauty through a person's eyes.


Comments about Body by Aisha Love

  • (1/8/2009 5:21:00 PM)


    i like very mutch good.......... (Report) Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/24/2008 8:14:00 PM)


    the body is sedutive.............to read (Report) Reply

  • (4/20/2008 3:13:00 AM)


    This is a well constructed poem. The repetition of a word, followed by its definition gives the reader a framework to hang on to. Your subject is a vexed one and your response to it a mature and optimistic I believe. Your name seems perfect for your compassionate nature. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2008 3:27:00 PM)


    This is beautiful, but deep and it touches me this will always have a place in my heart (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2008



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