When I'm gone
please don't cry.
Release your tears now
so I'll have wings to fly.
Tell the weeping willow to no longer
weep for there is no need.
Tell the sky to open its clouds
for my soul is ready to be free.
Free from mind, body, and heart
for these things have all grown apart.
If a tear does fall and you feel weird
have no fear because my soul is near.
The clouds have opened and
my soul is ready to leave.
At night wish upon a star with a silent prayer
and my soul will find your heart.
Aisha, you work is nice while sombody bines your heart somebody breaks so am invitin u 2 read my poem break up and others.
like it... poem starts like an open wound, but carries you well into the assurance that there will be healing...
Lovely poem. All should read. Fear of death removed so tenderly.
Great thought! Tears after our exit are not heard by us. I like this poem. Keep the pen alive
10/10.........................a tear drop to break u free from the shackles of painful memories..............yet a binding medium of common feelings..............I invite u to read my poem 'catharsis' lovely poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I felt such a gentle tone in the poem, you use literary devices well.