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Guardian Angel

Rating: 4.8

When I'm gone
please don't cry.
Release your tears now
so I'll have wings to fly.
Tell the weeping willow to no longer
weep for there is no need.
Tell the sky to open its clouds
for my soul is ready to be free.
Free from mind, body, and heart
for these things have all grown apart.
If a tear does fall and you feel weird
have no fear because my soul is near.
The clouds have opened and
my soul is ready to leave.
At night wish upon a star with a silent prayer
and my soul will find your heart.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 October 2014

Death is the departure from earth to heaven...we should not cry, no tears needed...nice one

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Gajanan Mishra 18 October 2013

good love, thanks. I like it Aisha.

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Jayne Davies 18 October 2013

I love this poem! Well done to you!

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Liliana ~el 18 October 2013

Becoming one.. letting go

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Kelvin Owusu 24 October 2012

Beautifully written really warms the heart, great work

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Akhtar Jawad 18 October 2014

A piece of beauty, a work of art, what a lovely poem!

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Lenny Camacho 18 October 2014

like it... poem starts like an open wound, but carries you well into the assurance that there will be healing...

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Savita Tyagi 18 October 2014

Lovely poem. All should read. Fear of death removed so tenderly.

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Babatunde Aremu 18 October 2014

Great thought! Tears after our exit are not heard by us. I like this poem. Keep the pen alive

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Soulful Heart 18 October 2014

10/10.........................a tear drop to break u free from the shackles of painful memories..............yet a binding medium of common feelings..............I invite u to read my poem 'catharsis' lovely poem

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