Book Poem by elenore elizabeth

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let me speak to you, all the secrets within.
worry, hope, love and dreams are in me.
forgotten i am tossed aside.
i am the world only you can escape to.
a world only you can see.
make me what i am.
make me remembered.
forget the pain, forget hope and come to me.
here you are free.
be with them as they speak,
or sit to the side an be a god within your might.
trust in me, here you will be free.
i am the world you can escape to.
a world where you are free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 08 September 2008

Pathos and grief unmistakable in your lines, but hope looms large as you whirl though. Take care of typos. arya

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Abubakar Ahmed Imam 31 March 2008

Consider revising your poem and see if you like it. poetry is about condensing your thoughts in a few lines to make beautiful sense. Book let me speak to you, all the secrets within. worry, hope, love and dreams are in me. (but) forgotten i am, tossed aside. i am the world you can escape to. a world you can see. so, make me what i am. make me remembered. forget all and come to me. here you are free. trust in me, here you are free. i am the world you can escape to. a world where you are free. elenore elizabeth keep writing.

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Sami Serenade 03 March 2008

'I Am The Only World You Can Escape To.' I Love This Line Lovley. And Fulll Of Grace I Can Just Imagine Someonne Hiding Needing A Place To Stay

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