Lives were meant to be lived in the open
Yet too afraid to admit we're broken
Finding locked chests with missing keys
Like a note in a bottle, thoughts sent out to sea
Don't run away forever
Don't think that you're clever
I read the note you sent out from the sea
I got you now you, so don't bother to flee
My words make you feel vulnerable
Your past seems unutterable
I'll help you recover
Aid you to discover
You are an uncharted island behind the mist
Only find yourself there when you lower your fist
The key was in the bottle you float
The treasure was in the note you wrote
Thanks for sharing this poem.. Like the rhyme scheme The key was in the bottle and a treasured note in it... Lived these lines Theodore
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great start with a nice poem, Theodore P. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks