Sunday, December 17, 2017

Bottled Up Letters Comments

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Lives were meant to be lived in the open
Yet too afraid to admit we're broken
Finding locked chests with missing keys
Like a note in a bottle, thoughts sent out to sea
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Theodore Penn
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Jazib Kamalvi 18 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Theodore P. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks for sharing this poem.. Like the rhyme scheme The key was in the bottle and a treasured note in it... Lived these lines Theodore

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