Boundless Journey Poem by Fallen Pieces

Boundless Journey

Rating: 5.0


A term which is usually abandoned,
no matter how far we may get to actually realize what we've done
that had caused such a fret;
We live only to conquer even the wildest of them;
to believe we can move forward but lose it all in the end;
Some of us are lucky enough to even live to see them come true,
while most of us find it rough to even barely make it through
But if we could only find the smallest measurement to choose those
tiny little ones and not to strive for the unrealistic detriment,
then we can have the strength to believe we've won

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 17 September 2008

as we move across the' causer and effect ' rerlationship, to every action there is equal response in magnitude and opposite vector, when we know the cause and we are supposed to know the effects to, never be befuddled what ever the graceful matter may be, quite thought provoking, ingenious, true to its spirit, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Koyel Mitra 16 September 2008

Excellent poem.Well penned.A10.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 September 2008

not to strive for the unrealistic detriment...good message...good rhyming (true/through) well done...thanks

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