Flecks of joy flick through bounty of beauty
blessing slips over grin sparking over stone
as moonlit flits across the darkness of door
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons
yet not divine but from a true heart unknown
graces of beauty yet trudges through barriers
verdant green and blue dusts all when similar
as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer
love moves faster all across sky azure in unison
all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue
space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream
tranquility finds truth of reason yet unobtrusive
mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual
depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow
yet know time and space even differs by creed of variety
knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within
soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons Rachel Ann Butler
'love moves faster all across sky azure in unison' Indeed captures the right imagery. And also Soul Conscept.. Lithe write up. And Ten dr. sakti
nice poem, makes us involve fully in it while reading...
This poem can be integrate to purely descriptive poetry. It contains beautiful ''similes; like : ''blessing slips over grin sparking over stone as moonlit flits across the darkness of door'' ''verdant green and blue dusts all when similar as sizzles of rain reels through the dusty summer'' and cognitive metaphors like: ''soul awakes by eternity in ages and eons'' ''space seems to mingle by melting shadow of dream'' 'mixed metaphors, (cognitive and visual) like: ''all dimensions by distances slowly blur in blue'' ''mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual '' conceptual metaphors, like: ''tranquility finds truth of reason yet unobtrusive'' oxymoronic epithets, like: ''knowingly unknown riffles'' very well written, with love..10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“mirror never fails to find its image even being virtual depth of silence slowly precipitates over rune of shadow yet know time and space even differs by creed of variety knowingly unknown riffles resolute from crowd within” The whole poem is lovely and full of magnificent metaphors. Very bright write it is, I get pleasure from it a lot. My love with 10+