Bow To Makers Poem by Sudeepta Sarkar

Bow To Makers

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I bow my head to the God as well as to the earth,
To the former who has given the new birth,
Who has taught to love by gifting the youth into old body,
Who has removed the superstitions and tuned up the melody.
I bow myself to 'em politely and their blesses spread o'er my activity.
Freedom of light makes me mad and remembering 'em I do my duty.

Saturday, October 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2018

Who has taught to love by gifting the youth into old body, Who has removed the superstitions and tuned up the melody. Bowing before God the Almighty and thanking...... very n ice poem. i thank you for your loving heart....... which is soo grateful. tony

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Sudipta Sarkar 11 January 2018

Thanking you for reading and commenting..

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 January 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Sudipta. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Sudipta Sarkar 11 January 2018

Thank you dear.

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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2015

Sudipta, here is how I would correct the wording. I hope this is helpful. I bow my head to God as well as to the earth, To the former who has given new birth, Who has taught to love by gifting youth into old body, Who has removed superstitions and tuned up the melody. I bow myself to them politely and their blessed spread o'er my activity. Freedom of light makes me mad and remembering them I do my duty.

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Gajanan Mishra 31 October 2015

Let us do our duty, life's security..go on..

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