Sudipta Sarkar


Bow To Makers - Poem by Sudipta Sarkar

I bow my head to the God as well as to the earth,
To the former who has given the new birth,
Who has taught to love by gifting the youth into old body,
Who has removed the superstitions and tuned up the melody.
I bow myself to 'em politely and their blesses spread o'er my activity.
Freedom of light makes me mad and remembering 'em I do my duty.

Topic(s) of this poem: prayer

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Bow To Makers by Sudipta Sarkar

  • Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 11:22:00 AM)


    Sudipta, here is how I would correct the wording. I hope this is helpful.

    I bow my head to God as well as to the earth,
    To the former who has given new birth,
    Who has taught to love by gifting youth into old body,
    Who has removed superstitions and tuned up the melody.
    I bow myself to them politely and their blessed spread o'er my activity.
    Freedom of light makes me mad and remembering them I do my duty.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (10/31/2015 9:43:00 PM)


    Let us do our duty, life's security..go on.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2015



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