Box Of Broken Dreams Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Box Of Broken Dreams

Rating: 5.0


What happened to dreams?
Mine were such simple ones.
Arranged whilst sleeping and
saved for the waking hours.
Never grandiose, just small and perfect
Never spoken aloud, for fear of loss.
Secrets hugged to my breast for safekeeping,
unwrapped slowly to savour.
To close my eyes and live within my dreamed up world,
smiling a self satisfied grin
at my forthcoming achievement.
What happened to those dreams?
Were they fulfilled?
Did I change them?
Do I still dream them?
No... none of the above
You came into my life.
With your confident swagger you
swept into my space
with your oh so slow, languourous smile,
and your own plans for my future...
Those words spoken in a way that deflects challenge
leaving all around impotent
when faced with your power.
Your feet, large and flat
with no mercy at all
crushing my insignificant dreams into the
dusty box.

Box Of Broken Dreams
Thursday, April 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: broken,challenges,cruelty,crush,dreams,emptiness,lost,sleeping
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 09 April 2018

I like the last two lines- beautiful poem about dreams.Voted 10.

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Lodigiana Poetess 09 April 2018

Hi Marieta, thank you so much for reading and commenting- always so very appreciated! Lodigiana x

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Chris Embrick 09 April 2018

I think I've emptied my box several times already. We often sacrifice our dreams for someone else's only to regret it later. Some of my dreams are just now coming true. Maybe I would have screwed them up when younger. A poem with relevance for many. Thank you poetess.

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Lodigiana Poetess 09 April 2018

Hi Chris, sometimes there is a 'right' time for dreams to come to fruition..although we very rarely recognise it at the time..I guess we should value the ones that we attain and keep hoping for the ones still to come..Thank you for your kind words x

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