Boy With His Head Down Poem by Brie Carter

Boy With His Head Down

Rating: 5.0


Miles had his head down on his desk.
He was the meanest brute
His head’s down on his desk so much
It began taking root.
Slender shoots grew down from his ear,
And sank in the desk top.
Tiny buds sprouted from his hair,
Forming a flower crop.
We like Miles a lot better now,
But he can’t come to play.
His head was on his desk so much,
We water him each day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Hernandez 29 January 2010

hey i like this poem its funny but also has a meaning and its good

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~EmmaLeigh~ Smith 29 May 2009

you have a way with words.

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Very unique...good work-DLG

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Carol Gall 15 May 2009

lol wonderful Brie great sense of humor

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Donall Dempsey 07 October 2008

Hee hee Brie...ya can hold your head up with this poem...playfully surreal and a delightfully delicious twist. And Miles to go before he sleeps and miles to go...before he sleeps.20 different uses for a mean brute...it kinda...grows on you! love Dónall Dónall

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