Brain Cloud Poem by Charlotte Bailey

Brain Cloud

Rating: 5.0


My brain won't function,
Gone to spaghetti junction.
Clouds in my head,
Lack of information been read!
I'm lost. I'm down.
Thick endless fog,
Useless like a bog,
Sucking In everything,
Determined to win!
Consume it all,
Til I can't recall...
Anything!

Wednesday, July 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,feeling,self,thinking ,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 July 2018

Good rendition of words elegantly brought forth with artistic brilliance. An insightful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Charlotte and do remain enriched.

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Charlotte Bailey 19 July 2018

Thank you for your kind words 😊

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Charlotte. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thanks

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