Break-Up Poem by Hayley Foster

Break-Up

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you loved me
and i loved you
but we broke up
and now we're through
the pain it hurt
it hurt that much
my heart is broken
and i don't want to be touched
i know the pain will slowly heal
but that's not what i want
what i want is real
the realness of being loved
cared for and being hugged
the warmth of your smiling face
bringing joy to all my days
the way you made me feel complete
my life was better without defeat
and now everythings just closing in
without your love that could have been
this is the way it was supposed to be
this is the way it was
this is the way i want it back
back to the way before we broke up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darlric John Lotik 13 October 2009

wow, so emotional poem, nice and unique piece of art, uhm.... may i have a request? would you right a poem about long distance love? i can relate at your poem, , .. excellent!

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