Broken Heart Poem by Hayley Foster

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


Broken heart
Torn in two
Shattered apart
“N”
I lost you
The tears that fell
They fell like blood
Twisted and turned into one
The days that last before I die
I refuse to say goodbye
My thoughts and dreams are gone and gray
I’m wishing they’d come back and stay
My hearts a shattered broken mess
Red with blood thick and wet
Tears that will not cease to fall
Piercing daggers through it all
And with scars and cuts along the way
Always dreaded the day you’d say
“I think that we should just be friends”
And this is where it all will end
And as you turn and walk away
There lies a broken heart you threw away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Midnight Blood 12 November 2008

I know how this feels, my heart has been shattered, torn, stabbed, and and even throw into Hell, and i'm always considering suicide, though i cut everyday

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Jay Boyd 17 November 2008

nice poem. alot of raw emotion.

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Ian Singer 18 November 2008

i love the emotion you show in your poem very good

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Kallie Madison 09 December 2008

GREAT POEM! ! I love it! !

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?????? 13 November 2019

A very sweet poem though it’s sad.

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Kate Lechoe 09 July 2015

Good poem. Being hurt is painful

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Tanvi Damle 22 January 2010

truly awesome..all the emotions..hurt..portrayed perfectly..

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Emily Torres 07 October 2009

I can connect with you 100% on this poem. your writting is seriously amazing. good job.

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Anthony Goodall 14 January 2009

very nice. you melted me with this poem, thankyou.

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