Breathe Poem by Khushi Batra

Breathe

Rating: 5.0


//Breathe//

My eyes blood shot
Smoke dancing in front of my eyes,
My heart beating rapidly,
A gasp choking me,
making me wrap a hand around my throat.
blood around me,
making me dizzy,
My bloodied nails dug into my skin,
Making me whimper in pain.
Seeing the blood ooze out of my body,
I wince.
Hot tears burnt my cheeks,
Trying to keep my eyes open,
Feeling my eyelids heavy,
I slumber in peace.
-Khushi :)

Saturday, December 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: abuse,abused,cry,depression,poem,poems,poetess,sad,violence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2017

A touching poem loaded with emotions.. liked your creation that is so nicely penned

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Khushi Batra 10 December 2017

Thank you!

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Khushi B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Khushi Batra 10 December 2017

sure, thanks a ton

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 December 2017

Khushi, such a good write...10+++

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Jacob 09 December 2017

I'm literally crying after reading this, the emotions are depicted really well, honestly

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