Breathing Poem by Sumita Jetley

Breathing

Rating: 5.0


i sit and think
the versions that are

stilled in me
so distilled in me

even the breathing

Thursday, October 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
and, the whole thing is so entirely itself
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 25 October 2018

Outstanding...........Lost in thoughts after reading your wonderful poem.10++++

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Dave Walker 25 October 2018

It's something we all need to do for life, but something that we don't really think about. Great write.

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