~ Broken ~ Poem by Ally Tenebrae

~ Broken ~

Rating: 4.5


Broken inside
You sat and you cried
Thinking it was all your fault
Betrayed by who you thought was a responsible adult
Blinded not knowing
Your weakness was finally showing
Your nightmare was unescapable
Yet you knew you were capable
To end your own misery
To set your broken soul free
Yet you didn't and your here today
Your here speaking the words I say
Because you and me we are one in the same
Sure we might not be completely sane
But we are survivors
No more contradictory
Now its just you and me.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Egi David Perdana 11 October 2008

is broken, on a broken with a broken keep writting

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Aijaz Asif 05 October 2008

falling on he ground like a clinking glass.....very well written indeed, great write....thanx

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Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

It works well, Ally - keep 'em coming!

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Serenity Prayer 29 July 2008

great job. i loved reading it. keep it up.

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Francesca Lam 22 July 2008

wow~ it's well written! i like it! Fran xo

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