Broken Heart
Icicles melting on window pane
Lonely tears from a broken heart
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So deeply touching and poignant poem embellished with superb imagery.
Rose Marie, this is one of those poems that comes to you in the middle of the night. Should you get up and write it so that you don't forget it? Fortunately, it was still there before breakfast!
2) cont'd: Rose Marie, this kind of positive constructive criticism makes the poetic journey such a joy! A world of thanks to you!
Fire and ice! I think Robert Frost paid you a visit. This is brilliant, Richard.
M.J., I once wrote a poem about fire and ice and can't seem to find it. Maybe Robert Frost will pay me another visit to help me jolt my memory. Happy that like this one, M.J.