Saturday, January 24, 2026

Broken Heart Comments

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Broken Heart

Icicles melting on window pane
Lonely tears from a broken heart
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Richard Wlodarski
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M.J. Lemon 03 February 2026

Fire and ice! I think Robert Frost paid you a visit. This is brilliant, Richard.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 January 2026

So deeply touching and poignant poem embellished with superb imagery.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2026

Rose Marie, this is one of those poems that comes to you in the middle of the night. Should you get up and write it so that you don't forget it? Fortunately, it was still there before breakfast!

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2026

2) cont'd: Rose Marie, this kind of positive constructive criticism makes the poetic journey such a joy! A world of thanks to you!

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