Broken Tree

Rating: 5.0
So where do you go my love
When angry tears flow down
Your lovely cheeks and fall
Even deeper to touch your feet

So where do you hide my love
When your are too afraid to breath
And no movements can be done
Cause you are broken inside

So where do you go my love
When in deep threatening dreams
Your screams seem silent and
No one comes to save your soul

You go with the wind to finally be free
You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree
Thursday, May 31, 2007
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COMMENTS
Afzal Shauq 17 February 2010
So where do you hide my love When your are too afraid to breath And no movements can be done Cause you are broken inside what a sweet poem is this one...really impressive.i wrote also one of my poems unfer the same title but different way... i liked this poem very much 10/10
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Winnie Angel 30 May 2009
lovely piece...the feel u presented is simply good and genuine..and the last two lines re simply beautiful..
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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009
'You go with the wind to finally be free You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree' I love these lines most, wonderful poem.
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~ Jon London ~ 27 June 2008
Yet another fine example of your talent....lovely written piece Thanks for sharing best wishes Jon
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Michael Saurer 06 June 2007
I can just repeat it one more time- I'm your fan! Impressive
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Ann Calusin 31 May 2007
oh my..it touches my heart.....just like when my friend told me this...go wd d wind, a hurricane..you will be........keep on writing...keep on inspiring brokem hearted people
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Marvin Brato 31 May 2007
Very romantic poetry Martine, it gives hope to a brokenhearted soul, worth the 10. Great write my friend.
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