Martine Kolber

Rookie - 0 Points (02 October 1983 / Luxembourg)

Broken Tree - Poem by Martine Kolber

So where do you go my love
When angry tears flow down
Your lovely cheeks and fall
Even deeper to touch your feet

So where do you hide my love
When your are too afraid to breath
And no movements can be done
Cause you are broken inside

So where do you go my love
When in deep threatening dreams
Your screams seem silent and
No one comes to save your soul

You go with the wind to finally be free
You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree


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  • (2/17/2010 5:29:00 AM)

    So where do you hide my love
    When your are too afraid to breath
    And no movements can be done
    Cause you are broken inside


    what a sweet poem is this one...really impressive.i wrote also one of my poems unfer the same title but different way... i liked this poem very much 10/10
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  • (5/30/2009 6:47:00 PM)

    lovely piece...the feel u presented is simply good and genuine..and the last two lines re simply beautiful.. (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/21/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    'You go with the wind to finally be free
    You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree'

    I love these lines most, wonderful poem.
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  • (6/27/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    Yet another fine example of your talent....lovely written piece


    Thanks for sharing

    best wishes
    Jon
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  • (6/6/2007 6:29:00 AM)

    I can just repeat it one more time- I'm your fan! Impressive (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2007 6:14:00 AM)

    oh my..it touches my heart.....just like when my friend told me this...go wd d wind, a hurricane..you will be........keep on writing...keep on inspiring brokem hearted people (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2007 4:49:00 AM)

    Very romantic poetry Martine, it gives hope to a brokenhearted soul, worth the 10. Great write my friend. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, March 4, 2011


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