Thursday, May 17, 2007

Broken Windmill Comments

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I saw a broken windmill
It is so sad, you know, to see
It did its job all its life
Now it crumbles painfully
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Marilyn Lott
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Margaret O Driscoll 04 May 2016

'A sweet melody once sang', yes can understand that it would be nice to see it repaired if possible

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Ranjit Ravindran 30 September 2009

I feel the intensity of your pain, As I have prayed for years in vain; For the windmill in my university lane, Which stands abandoned to be slain. What a view she would present, If made to whirl at the wind's current; Instead she's attired in a rusty vestment, Standing majestically to be extinct.

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ppp sss 31 December 2008

great imagery, thank you.

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