Friday, October 4, 2013

Broken Wings

Rating: 5.0
With bits & pieces step by step,
We've knitted a happy small nest.
My beloved and I, on this earth
Made a small heaven - in fact.
We were Dancing, cooing & singing in nights
In side that cuckoo's nest.

Life was flowing smoothly so nice,
Merrily … as the butterflies,
It was like a rainbow in the sky
With colors & luster
So happy were we! !

A gusty storm in between,
Shook away in a stormy day.
The lovely nest along with my love -
Was brutally ruined and snatched away.
The heaven on earth what we made -
That paradise was lost as such.
With a wounded heart
And the broken wings -
Now, I am deserted on a sandy bay.

Sitting alone on the river bank -
Saw the dying sun was setting down.
I saw a new piece of land -
Rising afresh on the river bed.

With the heavy heart, I could read...
Time and tide wait for none,
One will perish and other will come.

Amitava (4.5.2013)
Amitava Sur
Topic(s) of this poem: death
Dorothy- A. Holmes 27 April 2015
Mirror images cannot show the soul of a man...the best part of a man is within! Dorothy Alves Holmes APWLTS
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 27 April 2015
Mirror images cannot capture the soul of a man...the best part of a man is within! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Danielle Elsworth 12 February 2015
This poem touched my heart and tells exactly how I feel right now. Amore questa poesia così tanto il mio caro amico
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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2014
Simply profound and thought provoking, you have found your way through poetry! Totally love your poetry Amitava! You are another guiding light through sorrow's depths. Thank you. RoseAnn
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Romeo Della Valle 20 October 2013
Awesome and Thought provoking! Your Broken Wings as different as mine as they may look, they are still Broken Wings patiently waiting to be healed! Well crafted and touching with a nice flow! 10+++ Well deserved! You have clearly shown to the Poetry World your Talent and sensitivity as a human being! Thanks for sharing and keep it up my dear brother and the Almighty Bless You! Peace and Love for always! Regards from New York City
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 04 October 2013
true reflection of life. good write. I drift along the words' flow.
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