Waiting Impatiently Poem by Amitava Sur

Waiting Impatiently

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Though I volunteered to be truth abiding,
Truth has not endeared me yet.

What a swell headed man I am
Resenting to agree
with the harshness of truth! !
They do chock my throat and sour my mouth
Cannot digest yet, the call of truth! !

The day - I'll digest it's spanking
And bitter truth will not taste awkward,
I will be liberated from all grief.
Waiting impatiently, being restless
To vanquish that hurdle of life.

Cannot find that pathway yet,
To follow and reach that goal.
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Waiting impatiently, being restless
To vanquish that hurdle of life.
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Amitava (2.1.2015) 6-30 am


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Monday, January 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 26 January 2015

First of all, I must congratulate you for selecting a highly philosophical thought as the subject of your poem - our natural reluctance and resentment to agree to the harshness of truth! I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the poem. 'Waiting impatiently, being restless To vanquish that hurdle of life.' - Well, this is a state of mind that is seeking truth, seeking purity. May your enlightened mind continue to enlighten others through your beautiful poetry.

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Ramesh Rai 31 January 2015

It is the universal truth every one is waiting for final destination and we all are living and survived with the bitter truth where life seems to be more suffocating but desire for tomorrow is always alive. Nice job indeed with the truth of life.

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Lyn Paul 31 January 2015

Enjoyed your words, thought provoking. Thank you

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2015

A Beautiful poem, truth of life presented very well. Very true said in few lines.... The day - I'll digest it's spanking And bitter truth will not taste awkward, ....It is really very difficult to digest truth as it always tastes bitter. The moment one accept the truth, one will be freed from all grief and sorrow. Thought provoking write. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 06 February 2015

It is often difficult to gulp down unpalatable truths! But long training can help us accept life's stark truths! Until and unless we gain total liberation from the vexing realities of past life, our mind won't be at rest! Profound philosophical poem! Excellent!

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Shahin Latif 24 November 2015

Heartiest ink! Your journey is so enjoyable & philosophical. I believe that this poem delighted to me. Thanks a lot dearest poet Amitava Sur.

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Jitesh Shah 16 March 2015

very beautiful poem of truth i like it and also read my poem sir

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

Search of truth is a journey when we reach the final destination it is revealed to us but we don't remain in a position to let others know about it.....................10

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Roseann Shawiak 07 February 2015

Ahhhh! Once again a philosophical poem, I love how you write, Amitava! Yes, truth will always set you free, but at times it's hard to listen to and swallow. In the end though, when we accept it, we find it very enlightening and also illuminating to say the least. An excellent poem, one of honest truth, thought-provoking and profound. You always seem to touch upon reality and like a mirror reflect it back for us to look at, you do it very innocently and purely which has a profound effect on most of us. Thank you for this poem, Amitava. I give it' 100 - 10's. Love it, RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 07 February 2015

Ahhh! Once again a philosophical poem, I love how you write, Amitava! Yes, truth will always set you free, but at times it is hard to listen to and swallow. In the end though, when we accept it, we find it very enlightening and also illuminating to say the least. An excellent poem, one of honest truth, thought-provoking and profound. You always seem to touch upon reality and like a mirror reflect it for us to see openly - and you do it very innocently and purely, which has a profound effect on most of us. Thank you for this eye-opening poem, Amitava. I give you 100 - 10's for this one! Love it, RoseAnn

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