My mother did a wonder
When I was only eight.
Out came you as a thunder
To surprise me with your trait.
To me, it felt as a blunder:
Yet by paving the way,
You became my mentor;
Go along, you say.
With your voice so tender,
I wonder at the bay;
Still as a render,
Bright as a ray.
sweet brotherly kiss compose more such simple ones 'twill be bliss read the poems of those who have read yours many won't come to know have you thanked them they all want a return read of their poems then they will know who ur
Sure. I will do that. Thanks for being open hearted in letting me know your opinion. I really appreciate it.
Very sweet poem on the theme of brotherly affection....10++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely and expressive. Keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot for your encouragement