Bukowski, And Me. Poem by Thomas Vaughan Jones

Bukowski, And Me.

Rating: 3.5


Charlie was fat and coarse.
He didn’t appreciate women
He never had a woman throw her head back
or stretch out her limbs
then scream in ecstasy.
His kisses tasted of dead tobacco ash.
He drank red wine until he vomited.
Then he drank some more.

Yesterday an Italian woman
looked at me with hot eyes.

“Tomasino” she said,
“You are beautiful.
Give me Hugz”

I will give her hugz
And we will fly to Antigua

We will run on white sand
We will find that place where the sea
washes a path for whispering clamshells
and she will raise her neck to be caressed.
Her mouth will taste of wild strawberries.

I know this.
My eyes and heart have told me it is so.
When her lips are warm and moist
I will whisper in her ear

“Cara Mia

To rhyme is sublime”

Bukowski could not do this.
He is dead.
He drank until his liver sighed
and left to find a better life.

Stupido

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Famous or Infamous. I read his bio. New York society would invite him to read for them, mainly I suspect for the snobbery value. After the event, while they viewed the vomit etc. following his visit they might have wished they had gone for Kerouak. Personally, I would never have drunk from the punch bowl.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 22 February 2014

i read his book Post Office after a friend recommended it to me (i worked for u.s. postal service almost as long as Thomas was a 'fireman') . don't think all postal employees are the same! ! ! otherwise i don't 'know' bukowski. - - - - - - - - - - - - Her mouth will taste of wild strawberries ................when you find one whose mouth tastes of wild strawberries AND sweet whipped cream, give me her address, ............please! an interesting 'poem'. thanks for sharing. :) bri. this poem: i especially liked the lines: We will find that place where the sea washes a path for whispering clamshells ....... i think my japanese wife might like to find that place also. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 26 January 2014

Sir, you lines are real and you drew a very distinct line of differences between Yourself and Bukowski. Nice work, sir. . ...Oladehinde Joseph Ibikunle (Nigeria)

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John Rickell 25 January 2014

You have captured Bukowski well. I like the way you have linked both subjects

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