Bullies Poem Poem by Naomi Louise Short

Bullies Poem

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Bullies, Bullies wake up inside,
what would you do if your victim decided to die?
You don't understand the pain that you cause,
don't you know it can get you in trouble with the law?

The punches, the looks, the things that you say,
they're all apart of bullying and have their own way.
The people you bully PRETEND to be ok,
but deep down inside all they want to do is hide and cry.

The words that you say is like scars on their heart! ,
this sounds absurd to you,
but it makes people feel torn apart.

Bullies, Bullies wake up inside,
What would you do if your victim decided to die?

Tuesday, June 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: bullying,death,depression,loneliness,lonely,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So I have been through Bullying ever since I was 4, as I came into foster care and everyone made fun of me because I didn't have a mum or dad and so I didn't really have a normal childhood, from then the bullying just got worse and it got to the stage where ON SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES everyone done a petition for me to GO JUMP OFF A BRIDGE so it kind of led me to a very low place and so this is when I decided to write this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 25 June 2015

Dear Naomi, You are such an inspiration to others and too, at a young age. You show such strength and appear to take what is thrown at you with an amazing guard. These words could be distributed to schools. Possibly you are still a student? You have addressed a disturbing subject beautifully. Thank you for your notes.

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thank you! ! please check out my new poems and let me know what you think! ! Thanks as im a new teen poet and im new to write poems! ! Thanks x

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 June 2015

BRAVA Naomi! è questo il modo migliore di dimostrare a quelle miserabili persone quanto tu vali = this is the best way to demonstrate to those miserable people what you're worth.. Quoting Emily Dickinson: We never know how high we are / Till we are asked to rise.. that is when we are called to overcome something bad (especially) . Thus, be sure: You are a giant! Thanks for sharing and.. keep on writing! greetings from Italy

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