Burden And Load Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Burden And Load

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“It is bullshit” one reader remarked
“It is lovely and fit” another reader marked
“It is really worth to read” many readers came forward
I was altogether thrilled and dejected

Why some one should feel it shit?
Oh god, I praise humanity and greet
What is there to feel shit?
I brushed aside the thought

Overall it is encouraging
Readers are well behaving
I go with their sentiments
They are real with comments

It depends on mood
Some may think it as literary food
Some may take it lightly
Some may digest it very heavily

It is good to have either way
Swing in favor or against in any way
That builds good rapport
I need their blessings and support

I feel overwhelmed
Some times feel frowned
Not with remarks or comments
But with the views hey present

Well it is their domain
I must feel no pain
They are semi god
Let them share the burden and load

Sunday, March 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2014

“It is bullshit” one reader remarked “It is lovely and fit” another reader marked

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

welcome Maricela Ramírez, JaiRam Tiwari like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2014

I really get this. My thoughts exactly. 15 minutes ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2014

:) Rhonda :) 5 minutes ago I can agree with you on this! Nicely said :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2014

Good Sammer Ghouleh13 minutes ago Good

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Gajanan Mishra 23 March 2014

I need your blessings and supports, sir. good one,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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