Burden Beyond Explaining Poem by Alondra Gonzalez

Burden Beyond Explaining

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</>Knowing you’re out there so close to me
Yet not close enough to touch and face
Is a burden beyond explaining itself
It’s as if fate is teasing my very being

My need to talk to you is unremarkably foolish
Especially after all the pain you’ve put me through
I shouldn’t want you near me
Yet that’s all my heart yearns for

I yearn to hear your voice, to see your face
But I know that it’s all impossible now
The war inside my body hasn’t let me forget all your flaws
So I’m stuck with unresolved feelings for you

These feeling are driving me insane
For the fact that one minute I loathe you yet the next I don’t
This war is what’s making me miss you more every single second were apart
For I have no closure and without it I won’t ever be sane

In the end my mind will win this time
Because the pain has weakened my heart to defeat
Now I just have to realize I will no longer hear your voice at night
Realizing all these things at once is going to be the most agonizing moments of my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alondra Gonzalez 09 November 2011

yea theirs a big story behind this poem...theres a story behind most of my peoms

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Is there a big story behind your poems. I love the first two sentences

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Alondra Gonzalez 21 October 2011

yes its a war between my heart and mind!

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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2011

I hear your voice within trying fight all these things around..So clear when it screamed in this poetry, without a sound it still clearly heard here. It is good poem Alondra, always hard anyway to fight life and get what we wanted, sometimes we need to decide what we can do if we cant get, but to stay in numb will not open a way out of anything..Like i said, i know it's hard but maybe time will heal the bruise, it's better bruise now than it bleed and scared later...We still dont know if future have bitter to go, but sure the happy moments are there also...Keep writing and think for win not to loose may you win it for true_Unwritten Soul

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Vivek Haldar 17 October 2011

It seems that you are fighting with yourself through this poem of yours!

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