Sunday, January 15, 2006

Burning Bush Comments

Rating: 3.2

His hatred lingers deep in the depths of his soul
A soul supposedly ruled by religion(Christianity)
Where the New Testament teaches peace, love, and unity
He mocks every step that Christ himself took
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Joe Breunig 28 November 2006

An interesting write; however, one can never judge God by people's actions (or lack of them) .

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Mary Nagy 18 January 2006

Wow, this is a great commentary on the current situation. Great work. Sincerely, mary

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Hugh Cobb 15 January 2006

Couldn't agree more, Cokbod. If I could have I'd have given this poem a 12. Hugh

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I love the title, Cokbod. I love the sentiment. I believe you're right. I also think there's so much more that you could do with this magnificent title. This is an example of how a title can give birth to the poem.

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