Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

Burning Bush - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

His hatred lingers deep in the depths of his soul
A soul supposedly ruled by religion(Christianity)
Where the New Testament teaches peace, love, and unity
He mocks every step that Christ himself took
He's erasing our Judea-Christian laws
He's erasing second chances
He's erasing the progress we have made towards racism
He thinks he's a burning bush that everyone should listen too
but hopefully this bush turns to ashes


Comments about Burning Bush by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • Joe Breunig (11/28/2006 11:31:00 AM)


    An interesting write; however, one can never judge God by people's actions (or lack of them) . (Report) Reply

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  • (1/18/2006 6:49:00 PM)


    Wow, this is a great commentary on the current situation. Great work. Sincerely, mary (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2006 5:31:00 PM)


    Couldn't agree more, Cokbod. If I could have I'd have given this poem a 12.

    Hugh
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  • (1/15/2006 1:29:00 PM)


    I love the title, Cokbod. I love the sentiment. I believe you're right. I also think there's so much more that you could do with this magnificent title. This is an example of how a title can give birth to the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, May 20, 2011


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