Lailoni Marie

Rookie - 97 Points (11\22\92 / Los Angeles)

Burning Tears - Poem by Lailoni Marie

My burning tears I shed for you was very funny and weird
I never thought in a thousand years I would cry over you
My tears was colder then fire flames and hotter than an ice burn
It even made my nose burn
I was beyond faithful to you
I was nothing but a good woman to you
My burning tears is colder then you
The burning tears I shed for you just made fire flames run through my veins
And cost my heart pain
I would have thought that these burning tears would have scard my face
Thank god for water so that he can wash it away
Hating you is something I will never do
But these burning tears just taught me a lesson about guys like you

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about Burning Tears by Lailoni Marie

  • Rahman Henry (11/4/2015 10:51:00 PM)


    wonderfull poem about love, about life.... (Report) Reply

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  • (11/4/2015 10:48:00 PM)


    The pain of betrayal is always great in love. However, it is very difficult to hate the person you once loved from bottom of your heart. Realistic view expressed. Enjoyed reading the write-up. Thanks for sharing.7 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015



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