Tofur Damico


Burns - Poem by Tofur Damico

The sun
burns bright
its burning
me
slowly
like an ant
under an evil childs
magnifying glass
it feels too
hard to 'live
life has no
meaning anymore
while I squirm
around and try to get
out
of what is
happening, but
the light
it shines
so bright
it almost blinds
me
I cant see
where Im
going
I go
in circles
until, slowly,
the sun
takes my
soul
away


Comments about Burns by Tofur Damico

  • (11/14/2005 11:43:00 AM)


    Like this a lot, Tofur. very sad, though. Hope life is treating you ok now... Jon. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/7/2005 6:07:00 PM)


    Very good poem Tofur. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2005 5:37:00 PM)


    nice like it write more
    Lylyanna
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 7, 2005



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