But I Do.., Poem by pretty nutty ...

But I Do..,

Rating: 4.8


You don’t want to see me any more! ..,
But I do..,
You don’t want to hang out together..,
But I do..,
You’re the love of my life..,
But I’m not..,
Why life's not fair..,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scotty Dogg 15 January 2012

Nice poem Nutty Buddy! I enjoyed it. Beautiful. S.

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Samantha Turner 01 January 2012

Cute poem! =^.^= Keep it up, but try making some longer ones. Great job though! : D.

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Molay Toufik 25 December 2011

:) sad poem sad feeling, yeah my dear, i'm with you life it's not fear but we can move on it's natural ;) i like the poem, it's censer from your heart keep up Best

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Uche Chidozie 24 December 2011

First and wonderful attempt, the poem flows from the first line to the last, it's like a lamentation to one's lover, thanks for sharing.

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