Molay Toufik

Molay Toufik Poems

Some mechanical changes that do not change the intent of the poem.
proposed and corrected by my dear friend C Cruz

So far away from you
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You....my single love
You.... my best of
I imagine you when i move
Cause without you i’m done
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Believe me, I run from dying
I know, it's so dumb, but funny trying
WAR, around me everywhere
SOLDIERS, killing everyday, I swear.
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Molay Toufik Biography

my name is Toufik born in Rabat, Morocco I'm not writer even poet, cause the truth i can't be good in English it's not my first language i try to write correctly what i feel i Know maybe i can't tell you i'm good writer but i have feeling like you and you like all of us because we are human been so i hope you will enjoy reading my poem and why-not feel what i feel that will be great give me your opinion because i trust in you share with me your feeling when you read what i feel that's all we need and that exactly the meaning of been my friend Sincerely Toufik)

The Best Poem Of Molay Toufik

Deep Feeling

Some mechanical changes that do not change the intent of the poem.
proposed and corrected by my dear friend C Cruz

So far away from you
Deep in love with you
If you're not my girl
I will try anything, I could
Everything; because, I should
If not, I will look the fool
Since no one lives without soul
That's why I'll call anytime by phone
Trying not to be alone

Molay Toufik Comments

Nicki Luvetti 23 January 2012

I love that you try so hard with your english to deliver this truly incredible poem to the world. I agree with Jack Green... I don't know if anything more poetic exists that truly comes from the heart... If you wouldn't mind, I would love it if you could critique my poetry... -nicki

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Heyyou Boy 23 December 2011

From the heart, and i cant think of anything more poetic.

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Bella Hernandez 23 December 2011

although his english isnt good. doesnt mean that others wont understand his beautiful poems of love. both Deep Feeling, Love Speaks, has the most tremendous meaning of love! ~Bella

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