But No Ideas Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

But No Ideas

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To earn name is long process
It is great job earned in phases
With lots of ups and down
You have become known

That may be pulled down
At one stroke by fault of not your own
But by those around you
And bring blot on your name as you go through

You are master
And doubt caster too
You have apprehensions
But no ideas for prevention

It is better look around
For suitable place to be found
Adjust self for little more space
This may keep you in race

Try best as much you can
Catch hold of known man and remain
In touch for betterment
This will be nice movement

You carve out your own kingdom
That position might have enjoyed seldom
You have created it by ability
Certainly with the blessings from almighty

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2013

Needs more work. Hashan Mannan9 minutes ago No clear and well expressed theme or story. Poetic flow is weak. Punctuation are required.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 August 2013

What we desire is difficult to get and what we loose is so easy so if we achieve must thank to Lord Glory to be Allah nice poem with simplicity

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2013

To earn name is long process It is great job earned in phases njoyed seldom You have created it by ability Certainly with the blessings from almighty

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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