But When Poem by me poet yeps poet

But When

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The sun has set
stars unseen
snow is now falling
you said

you would come

heavens silently
drain their load
softly soft music I upload
awaiting

you said you'd come

stars will not be seen
for another week
snow shall not cease
the chilly winds
will continue to blow
awaiting you
I still remember you say

you'd surely come

come what may
Icant' wait any longer
send some one to my door
to tell me
where I can meet you
just once more

you said
you surely would
come

But When

Tuesday, April 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,snow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Commit if you can keep it
Else forget it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Srijita Mondal 01 May 2019

Very good poem..10+++

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Anjandev Roy 01 May 2019

Pleasant poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.

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so kind of u AR DO read Where Eternity and Infinity Meet

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Kevin Patrick 30 April 2019

heavens silently drain their load softly soft music I upload awaiting Some well penned lines, you must be made of stone, cause you rock it with style.

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uuuuuuuu rrrrrrrrrrrr sooooo kind all these days I awaited KEVIN so kind of u DO read Where Eternity and Infinity Meet YOU WILL LOVE IT SOME SANG IT

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Jennifer Birchall 30 April 2019

Think we have all had unkept promises at some point, a wonderful poem written beautifully dear Poet.

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