But When Poem by me poet yeps poet

But When

Rating: 5.0


The sun has set
stars unseen
snow is now falling
you said

you would come

heavens silently
drain their load
softly soft music I upload
awaiting

you said you'd come

stars will not be seen
for another week
snow shall not cease
the chilly winds
will continue to blow
awaiting you
I still remember you say

you'd surely come

come what may
Icant' wait any longer
send some one to my door
to tell me
where I can meet you
just once more

you said
you surely would
come

But When

Tuesday, April 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Commit if you can keep it
Else forget it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Srijita Mondal 01 May 2019

Very good poem..10+++

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Anjandev Roy 01 May 2019

Pleasant poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.

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so kind of u AR DO read Where Eternity and Infinity Meet

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Kevin Patrick 30 April 2019

heavens silently drain their load softly soft music I upload awaiting Some well penned lines, you must be made of stone, cause you rock it with style.

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uuuuuuuu rrrrrrrrrrrr sooooo kind all these days I awaited KEVIN so kind of u DO read Where Eternity and Infinity Meet YOU WILL LOVE IT SOME SANG IT

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Jennifer Birchall 30 April 2019

Think we have all had unkept promises at some point, a wonderful poem written beautifully dear Poet.

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