Thursday, December 17, 2015

Butterflies Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the dark and cruel world I see,
A young untamed caterpillar,
Crawling hopelessly in the wind,
On the trees and bushes,
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Marjorie Mandahinog
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 August 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Marjorie. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 29 January 2016

Lovely motivational piece of poetry depicting courage, hope, and faith; as one strives for a future greater than past and present deplorable situations. A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Majorie. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Cherry Acero 17 December 2015

Sad from the start..but in the end you will feel the hope that another phase of life is waiting to unfold..

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2015

The world is cruel becsuse of the wicked people among us. Nice work.

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