By The Well Poem by obed Souza

By The Well

Rating: 5.0


The journey will be long …
The voice of silence is so loud!
My soul thirsts!
A silent tear insists on falling.
Weary and alone, I´ve set my armor down.
I am sitting by the well
I wish I were a hero,
But life insists on telling me this is not fiction,
I am not on the big screen,
It´s me: my very being, without any make up.
No! No surrender to death at all!
I chose to believe
And I ´ve come because I want to say
I ´m so tired, Lord
This long path …
This less travelled road I chose demands courage
It would be easier to see only the visible
But I dare to believe and seek out the unseen
I ´ve come to draw some water,
Because I shall not stop, I must walk on
I just want to draw some water
I cast all my loneliness on your feet,
And your feet… and my feet also…
This dust from the desert covering us …
You … so powerful, yet so close to me.
I ´ve come to share myself with you
And enjoy this refreshing encounter
I just want to be by this stream of living waters
Tomorrow is another day …
For now… I just want to share myself and my humanity with you …
Stay with me, and I shall find rest.
To lay down my very self in your presence
Full surrender of all I am and yet to be before you
And share these sweet moments of companionship
At this moment, when this void within me
Meet your Being
While drinking of you
My strength is renewed for this ongoing journey
And I willl rise up to the truth of being loved and accepted by you.
After all, wouldn´t you elect us ‘ friends ‘?
Instead of ‘ master ‘ you preferred to be a brother :
Son of man .

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 21 September 2009

This piece is full of faith and love...well done. Thanks for the reminder, it makes me a new man. Take care...

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Matt Mooney 15 August 2009

'For I have carved your name on the palms of my hands' (New Testement) . We are not forgotten or down the ranks in God's great plan for us. The poem brings us back to Jesus at the well and the mercy and compassion he showed to sinners there who came to see him. We all need to go to the well now and then. A poem of weight in its import and yet beautifully light poetically. Read my poem 'Carpenter's Son' which I added on yesterday.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

A lovely poem with positive approach.10++

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i enjoyed it in its entirety.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 March 2009

Beautiful poem. ' The voice of silence so loud ', very true. A very good example of broken imagery........10/10.

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