Friday, May 12, 2006

California Is Dreaming Comments

Rating: 5.0

Honoring rules far less well on the beach
than with the observance expected at home
we tend to forget what our ministers teach,
the rules of Jerusalem, Canterbury, Rome,
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Gina Onyemaechi 12 May 2006

On the note of typos, Gersh, I wholeheartedly recommend you a course in Pitmans.: -) Mind you, if I had the choice of writing with masterly rhyme and rich, dreamy language (as demonstrated in the above poem) or typing flawlessly, I know which way I'd go, and I think you do as well, Gershy. After all, hire-typists are ten-a-penny.: -) With a humble smile, Gina.

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Lori Boulard 12 May 2006

I just HAD to sidle over to this one, having recently posted my sentiments along the same title. A lovely and accurate glimpse of my heart's home - a bit 'dreamy' too - just right for the setting. Cheers, Lori

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