Calm Down, Calm Down Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Calm Down, Calm Down

Rating: 5.0


Calm down, calm down
You have fully known
The fact of life
Still wants to be wife?

Well, I concede and flow
I too have decided to blow
I prefer to sink and go
With each call your simply glow

You can’t be left alone
In crisis and at home
Just wait for me to welcome
I rush to and surely come

I practically ran to see you
On the way I had difficulty to pass through
You were blocking me to run faster
I wanted to be with you sooner

I wish to roll on
As if battle to be won
I shall hold your hand
And whisper” will you be ever my friend”?

I miss you and your call
But there seems to be no wall
I will grab you with earnest wish
Till river flood is in spate and finish

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

Calm down, calm down You have fully known The fact of life Still wants to be wife?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

Great Imagery! Guilty Pleasure36 minutes ago Good Poems show and do not tell. i enjoyed the ride! Thanks!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

Regina Lee16 minutes ago The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships. The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist. The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions. learned a new word = spate I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh Mehta5 minutes ago spate.. when river is rising it has so many waves and crush whoever comes in the path. so is the wishes of woman.. like river spate

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

The parts I understood were very good Regina Lee3 minutes ago The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships. The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist. The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions. learned a new word = spate I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

friendship one Rekha Shukla11 minutes ago Missing the good friend Comment +1 offensivly gay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

XXXN XXXXXXS3 minutes ago I'm really not a homophobe but really? I mean seriously, really? Comment +1 Fag.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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