Calm Down, Calm Down Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Calm Down, Calm Down

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Calm down, calm down
You have fully known
The fact of life
Still wants to be wife?

Well, I concede and flow
I too have decided to blow
I prefer to sink and go
With each call your simply glow

You can’t be left alone
In crisis and at home
Just wait for me to welcome
I rush to and surely come

I practically ran to see you
On the way I had difficulty to pass through
You were blocking me to run faster
I wanted to be with you sooner

I wish to roll on
As if battle to be won
I shall hold your hand
And whisper” will you be ever my friend”?

I miss you and your call
But there seems to be no wall
I will grab you with earnest wish
Till river flood is in spate and finish

Thursday, September 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: flood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

Calm down, calm down You have fully known The fact of life Still wants to be wife?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

Great Imagery! Guilty Pleasure36 minutes ago Good Poems show and do not tell. i enjoyed the ride! Thanks!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

Regina Lee16 minutes ago The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships. The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist. The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions. learned a new word = spate I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh Mehta5 minutes ago spate.. when river is rising it has so many waves and crush whoever comes in the path. so is the wishes of woman.. like river spate

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

The parts I understood were very good Regina Lee3 minutes ago The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships. The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist. The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions. learned a new word = spate I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

friendship one Rekha Shukla11 minutes ago Missing the good friend Comment +1 offensivly gay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2013

XXXN XXXXXXS3 minutes ago I'm really not a homophobe but really? I mean seriously, really? Comment +1 Fag.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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