Close The Eyes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Close The Eyes

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We may face onslaught and not survive
If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
Nature may not spare us for committed sin
We may have complete loss and situation no win

Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers
Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
Progress may be around but not to rejoice
No one can claim prosperity with single voice

Do we want compete disaster and annihilation
No fresh air but only poison for inhalation
Nature striking at will with deadly weapons
We watch helplessly ………………

We are polluting air with deadly gases
Ground water depleting with heavy access
No one seems to be worried and tense
We have gone berserk with loss of sense

We never heard of tsunami or typhoons before
So many natural calamities and disasters come to fore
Earth quakes and floods have become scene of the day
Nature may not spare us, making hell everyday

Do we need prosperity at cost of eco balance?
Can't we see disasters without using lance?
Have we to wait for till last day to come?
Is it acceptable to mankind and always welcome?

We may have to close the eyes and prepare for worst
Who may bear brunt or disappear first?
Future generation may not forgive and forget
Let us build new concept before it is too late

Sea is loosing charm and creatures disappear
Land also not spared and heavily bears
Sky is already with full of aimless objects
Nothing will be left on earth but only rejects

Sea may rise with tidal waves and strike
Cities may be wiped out …………..
Earth may bear deserted look with no sign or trace
Future historians may write with loss of face

Close The Eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nagesh Ratnavelu 10 October 2009

Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over Progress may be around but not to rejoice

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Sangita Rao 11 October 2009

Nature may not spare us for committed sin We may have complete loss and situation no win

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Sita Kesri 11 October 2009

Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over Progress may be around but not to rejoice

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Ramdulari Sinha 11 October 2009

Progress may be around but not to rejoice No one can claim prosperity with single voice

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Sadia Hussain 11 October 2009

We may face onslaught and not survive If no timely action is taken or efforts revived Nature may not spare us for committed

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Bharati Nayak 08 March 2021

Sea is loosing charm and creatures disappear Land also not spared and heavily bears Sky is already with full of aimless objects Nothing will be left on earth but only rejects---The poem was posted in 2009 and the telltale signs of nature's wrath as prophesied are so apparent now

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, a great regret that should be but, yet man follows the same course Highly impressed by the poem....10

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Ratna Patel 23 October 2009

We are polluting air with deadly gases Ground water depleting with heavy access

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Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2009

I closed my eyes and I see a true poet in front of me.

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Winnie Angel 16 October 2009

Theme true in essence..Winnie

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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