Can I...? Poem by Toni Bellanger

Can I...?

Rating: 5.0


Can I call just to tell you I love you? Will you say anything back?

Can I see you even though it's late? Will you come to fulfill my desire?

Can I read you the poems I wrote you? Will you listen to them?

Can I kiss your beautiful hands? Will you let me without hesitating?

Can I hold you in my arms? Will you find comfort there?

Can I ask you to kiss me? Will you move in without a word?

Can I tell you I'm going to miss you? Will you understand why?

Can I act the way that I feel? Will you be able to handle it?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Can I call just to tell you I love you? Oh! a lover's eagerness as well as confusion touched me...Luv - Brishti

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Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

hey toni...write use that frame you use for your camero poem....this is cooll too...but now that poem is tousands times better....hey by the way i wrote how my ex came in a 'charade' and how all things went hey wire...new one come and read it...... see the case is i m some poor wretched fellow...i v to ask money from mom even for my busfare lol...see ya regards shan

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Akram Awadat 04 June 2009

fanastic poem, well done 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

Lots of lovely questions are there in this nice poem. Following lines/questions concluding that expressing the message of the poem: 'Can I act the way that I feel? Will you be able to handle it? ' Love it 10+

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Anjali Sinha 04 June 2009

nice poem so many can I's

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Ivor Hogg 14 July 2009

Why do you feel the need to ask? Just do it

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Go Joanna 13 June 2009

Of course you can.. it's a freedom land...

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Abby Mackaway 10 June 2009

Questions every girl in love asks, conscious of them or not. very easy to relate to. nice job

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Kushal Vaishnani 06 June 2009

Flow of words comes really well out of your pen... that too in graceful manner.10 +++ Regards Kushal

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Shekhar Joshi 06 June 2009

shows your love towards your boyfriend.......asking his consent before doing anything...... good one

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Toni Bellanger

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Detroit, MI
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