Can I call just to tell you I love you? Will you say anything back?
Can I see you even though it's late? Will you come to fulfill my desire?
Can I read you the poems I wrote you? Will you listen to them?
Can I kiss your beautiful hands? Will you let me without hesitating?
Can I hold you in my arms? Will you find comfort there?
Can I ask you to kiss me? Will you move in without a word?
Can I tell you I'm going to miss you? Will you understand why?
Can I act the way that I feel? Will you be able to handle it?
hey toni...write use that frame you use for your camero poem....this is cooll too...but now that poem is tousands times better....hey by the way i wrote how my ex came in a 'charade' and how all things went hey wire...new one come and read it...... see the case is i m some poor wretched fellow...i v to ask money from mom even for my busfare lol...see ya regards shan
Lots of lovely questions are there in this nice poem. Following lines/questions concluding that expressing the message of the poem: 'Can I act the way that I feel? Will you be able to handle it? ' Love it 10+
Questions every girl in love asks, conscious of them or not. very easy to relate to. nice job
Flow of words comes really well out of your pen... that too in graceful manner.10 +++ Regards Kushal
shows your love towards your boyfriend.......asking his consent before doing anything...... good one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Can I call just to tell you I love you? Oh! a lover's eagerness as well as confusion touched me...Luv - Brishti