Can I Get There Comments

Lovely poem with bittersweet yearnings.... don't we all want the same thing in the end? It is almost like a mantra of a soul to other souls.... beautiful.

Unexpectedly, Sadiq, you take me to my childhood days...to my home town play ground where i spent many happy days... you are a bird singing sweetly sitting on a nostalgic tree…good composition. Congrats!

Sadiqullah, this is so very lovely. The imagery is wonderful and I totally understand. Sometimes we just want to 'get away from it all', almost as if to go back to childhood and just enjoy and savour all of the finer things in life, the stuff that doesn't cost, just natural beauty. HG: -) xx