Can I See Through Your Eyes Poem by Laurie hill
Can I See Through Your Eyes
May i borrow your faith, for a little while,
I promise you, I'll keep it safe,
Will you walk with me, just one more mile,
Take pity on this homeless waif,
the hand that you offer is gentle,
the trust that i feel is complete
you speak of a beautiful bethel
Rose petals, all strewn at your feet
Can i see through your eyes, for a little while,
see the heaven your taking me to,
I trust in the warmth of your smile,
And the light, that's surrounding you.
Can i dream of the love, that awaits me,
That you promised will welcome me there,
Will the wings that you spread enfold me
And the weight of my soul will they bear
And i ask, as we soar, will they miss me,
The friends I have left far behind,
Will they know that now i am happy,
with the angels so gentle and kind,
when they borrow your faith for a little while,
when they follow the path that i've trod,
will they too feel the calm that has touched me,
when they sit at the feet of our God.
when they sit at the feet of our God. .................................................... Laurie, this is a remarkably, you are the master of words and the thought...10... Best wishes, Tsira
trulky a beautiful piece. loved the chosen topic.
This is truly an astonishing poem, I am drawn deeper and deeper by every line written, so touching Laurie
Your piece is beautiful and an uplifting one I love these lines of yours below ....................................................... will they too feel the calm that has touched me, when they sit at the feet of our God. ..Laurie, you have drawn me closer and closer to God reading this. What a wonderful write you have here.It is very peaceful to read
This is one of my favorite styles; so rhythmic, so musical..I always get lost in words such as this. Tremendous writing.
This is a beautiful reassuring poem of faith and hope. Thoughts very well expressed and so touching. Thank you for sharing. :)
The calm, tranquility and beauty of these words would turn the head of steadfast atheist. Simply stunning! S :)
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 8:40:36 AM # 1.0.0
Wow. I'm speechless Laurie. This poem touched me deeply. I got tears in my eyes my friend, they are from the emotion caused by the beautiful imagery and feelings i got reading your poem. My faith soared with it, gave me tears of joy. Faith is the way you described it my friend, it can lead people to paradise and those that decide to follow. God bless you, he has already touched you with His inspiration. Am keeping this one Laurie :)