michelle al G

Rookie (1995-2-21 / riyadh)

Can'T Let You Go...... - Poem by michelle al G

You are deep,
i can't sleep,
Why is that? ! ,
is it your hat,
Oh wait! ,
it is your beautiful eyes,
that makes me maze,
I am in a map,
While you are standing on a mat,
driving the car,

with a bar,
It is 'you'! ,
singing a song,
It is a tag,
for me,
to come 'back',
with a sack,
of flowers,
oh what a wonderful flowers? ,
But for whom! , he said,
It is for you, i said
You are my shining sun,
and i am in the fun.!


Comments about Can'T Let You Go...... by michelle al G

  • (6/28/2010 1:56:00 PM)


    A cheerful poem. Good expression! Loved it; D (Report) Reply

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  • Gregory Pierre-jerome (6/3/2010 9:42:00 AM)


    read cannot let go on my list.....i think we share same views...this is better than mine thoug h.great write (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2010 10:41:00 PM)


    very lovely this poetess writes from heart
    it is your beautiful eyes,
    that makes me maze,
    I am in a map,
    While you are standing on a mat,
    driving the car,

    with a bar,
    It is 'you'! ,
    singing a song,
    It is a tag,
    (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/3/2010 9:59:00 AM)


    wow... so good... i see poetry and poetic lines! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 3, 2010


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