Can'T Wait For Perfection Poem by Margaret Alice Second

Can'T Wait For Perfection



Sweet, so sweet the air-con revenge: finally
the system is fixed, I'm purple and blue with
the cold in the office, everyone huddles in all
kinds of garments, we had complained a lot
and now we must suffer the blast of icy winds
and wear our warm winter minks

I can bring my rose-petal top I had despaired
of never wearing and this is better than over-
heating I think, though why we should be tor-
mented this way, never allowed any comfort
strikes me as a mystery - maybe this is how
government employees suffer Purgatory

And as life continues as we leave our physical
bodies we go straight to a kind of bureaucratic
heaven where the temperature will be just right
I can't wait for such perfection…

Monday, February 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 September 2015

And as life continues as we leave our physical bodies we go straight to a kind of bureaucratic heaven where the temperature will be just right I can't wait for such perfection… in the final stanza, you lifted up the mundane problems into a life in heaven. bureaucratic Heaven. you wrote. nice poem. thank you very much.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2015

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Yes, such perfection; but, mankind need to change for the better. E.K.L.

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