Can You Poem by ESPN CHICK

Can You



Can you see all the pain inside of me
All the pain that I've hidden
Can you see the broken smile that lye's on my face
Are you seeing that its not real

That I'm faking the smiles everyday
Pretending that every things okay
I'm hiding inside myself
Can you tell that I'm broken

Can you see that I'm dying slowly
Wondering if anyone will notice at all
Keeping all the tears behind my eyes
Because I know no one will ever understand

I'm so tired of being here
Tired of facing these storms
Tired of being broken and bruised
Can you see that I'm ready to give in

Oct 4,2008

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

That I'm faking the smiles everyday Pretending that every things okay I'm hiding inside myself Can you tell that I'm broken good lines. you are really good at this sad stuff. I love it! ! ! good job. Becca

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Dhruv Gaba 04 October 2008

pretty sad i like it though! ! ! !

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