Candle Of Love Poem by Octavia Tisdale

Candle Of Love

Rating: 5.0


He was the fire...the fire to my burning candle

When I first recieved him he lit up my life

His flame burned vibrantly, it burned with care, and

it burned forever

Now that fire that once burned for me won't even
spark for me

Maybe its old, maybe I'm not lighting it right..or
maybe his flame is tired of my candle

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathaniel Booker 05 September 2008

Good Write Octavia... Maybe, just maybe, his matches are wet... I hate when that happens... Excellent write **10** Be Well

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Octavia Tisdale

Octavia Tisdale

South Hill, Virginia
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