Captive Queen, Tears I Could Never Tame (12) Poem by Captain Cur

Captive Queen, Tears I Could Never Tame (12)



But thy tears were tears I could never tame
The warm droplets of a feverish rain
Acquiring them in this pain of flight
A small creature scavenging thru the night.
I carry this burden of desire
And walk upon the coals of burning fire,
All the treasures I once held high and dear
Quickly spinning off this revolving sphere
Reduced to foraging, no seeds to plant,
To never sign my mark or leave my stamp;
In these pits the flames forever fanned,
My honor and great armies both disbanded,
I, a mere shadow trapped within the shade,
A lifeless being something that will fade,
Alive with paling flesh and blood unseen,
A skeletal creature that can no longer bleed!

Friday, January 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: captivity,knight,queen,story
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Captive Queen" is a multi-part poetic story written in iambic pentameter. It chronicles
the story of a Queen usurped from power and held prisoner, a prisoner of both love
and fate. This poem is comprised of letters written to her by hopeful lover and dutiful
Knight who attempts to free his Queen and restore her Kingdom to its former glory.
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