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Picking Daisies In The Sun, Love Poems

Rating: 5.0
I tossed a love poem to the sea,
I told it swim, my words, I let you free.
They came to rest upon an isle's golden sand,
they declared not that they were written by my hand.
She read the grains while picking daisies in the sun
an unknown heart I'd never know I'd won.

Gladly do I part with thee
words of love given to the sea.
Awash on shores of lonely sand
etch in grains with unknown hand.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2021
The first line can be extended into a thesis! I find great deapth in your poetry dear captain!
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 March 2021
A true final: ............gathered all my daisies round, and fashioned him a living crown............Unbelievable romantic!
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 March 2021
A poet like Captain Cur coming down the aisle with his romantic Classic Love poems. WOW! The archaic words and lines have done their duty. A grand mesmerizing feast while reading this lovely romantic song.5 Stars!
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 February 2021
I loved the flow and beauty of the poem like fresh daisies dancing in the sun.5 stars
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 February 2021
A marvellous poem Captain Cur! A love poem tossed into the sea with spectacular images and metaphors so beautiful.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2021
A splendid romantic poem with great rhyme and rhythm... fascinating poetic expression! Just beautiful...5 stars
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Robert Murray Smith 02 January 2021
Imaginative and so romantic.
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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020
love cap curr when ur relaxed do read my poems u may love em
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Kesav Easwaran 11 March 2020
'I know one whose heart is free will give her love to the guileless sea' Wonderful line, my friend. Here is a great love poem. The sea goer's heart, his love 10+
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2018
This is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression. My favorite lines are.... I read a love poem in the sand that wrote itself with unknown hand. I felt although a mystery those words of love were meant for me. I looked upon the glistening waves and heard his song and said his name.
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